I thought this was very nearly very very good. I thought the top row change was clever and the fact that you can make the writers name out of some of the letters in the object is neat, and the scattered mess at the end also neat.
The thing that is bugging me is the clashes. I can’t see why you need three of them at all: the one letter works fine, the second letter doesn’t add anything. So the entire clash thing appears to be to change an n to a c to get the x into the bottom line. Maybe there was no other way to get it in (lx would have worked?). Am I missing something with the clashes?