IonaCarr, the first AU, as Scatterbox indicated, is an inclusion. The second is (to me) an obscure synonym for 'wants' with an equally obscure synonym for 'make out' followed by TS.
As to the finishing off, I needed to research a little of the book, which you say you have, for the main characters. It helped me to know these in order to make the changes required (I'm not convinced I got everything right, but that doesn't really matter).
Researching the book revealed that the author was in some manner an intermediary between John Locke and Arthur Schopenhauer. Fascinating !