Hi again crackabilly, I've only given limited help pointing out errors to allow you a chance to go from there but I can provide more should you require.
Only 7 of your 8 are part of the 11, the "r" is wrong.
Also 21a, "p" & 10d, "d" are wrong.
The phrase cryptically tells how to complete the thematic of which 25, 33 and 39 across & 10 down are. There are others which you may have answered but can't see how without knowing the phrase.
Hope this helps but please post again if you would like more detailed help.