I've enjoyed recent Everymans but this one felt a bit forced in places. I had a lot of trouble with it, especially the aforementioned 24, which was LOI. Had to set the puzzle aside for a while and return.
16a "Ear lent, grievously everlasting" (7) is verging on the nonsensical.
I assume it's an allusion to "Friends, Romans, countrymen..... " but it's so short and completely devoid of any reference to Shakespeare, so who knows? 🤷♂️